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Title: Like they used to
Rating: PG
Genre: Supernatural, gen with some suggestion
Warning: It isn’t about death, but someone is dead
Archive: Now also at AO3
Notes: Post-series fic
Summary: Where we are when it's all over...


***

The guy drives her home after saving her from that thing. She’s got no clue what it was, only that it was enormous, and slimy and had way too many teeth.

She twists at her sleeves as they drive in silence. The car is old – vintage – but sweet, still black and shiny.

There’s something hanging on the dash, and her fingers go to touch it. It's maybe a necklace? An amulet...?

“Don’t touch that!”

She jerks back in her seat, heart pounding.

He seems to realize he’s frightened her, and speaks again, softly this time.

“Sorry. It’s my brother’s.”

“And where's he?” she asks. The words are out before she really thinks, and she bites her lip. He may be very handsome, but he just killed something awful with more-or-less his bare hands, and she's not really sure she wants to get into small talk.

“He’s dead.”

So much for small talk.

"I'm sorry."

“Don’t be. He’s in heaven, with his angel.” She can see a slight twist to his lip; maybe a smile, maybe a sneer. “They’re probably fucking on a cloud right now.”

She frowns, “Are people allowed to fuck in heaven?” she asks, before realizing what a stupid question that was.

A definite smile this time, a flash of white in the darkness.

“I doubt Dean would think it much of a heaven if they weren’t.”

He pulls up outside her house.

“Still,” he continues. “I’ll never know for certain. If I die, unfortunately I’m going the other way.”

“You mean when you die,” she corrects, a prickle of unease creeping up the back of her neck.

He turns to look at her, the first time he’s met her eyes since checking she was OK. His eyes are dark, almost black, in the night.

“Sure,” he says.

***

She gets out of the car and watches him drive away.

The road is empty, and even the hoverstreet above their heads is empty too, at this time of night. She can hear the faint whine of jet engines in the still, silence of the night, but that’s from a long way away – over from the hoverway east of here.

She watches the car turn the corner and disappear. Old cars are just way cooler than the efficient, soulless hovercars like her father has, but very impractical. She wonders where the guy even finds fuel for it.

She thinks she’ll tell her boyfriend tomorrow about the car - you rarely see cars more than 200 years old these days - but not about anything else.

He wouldn’t believe it, anyway.

***

Date: 2009-09-20 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fleshflutter.livejournal.com
That was awesome. :)

Date: 2009-09-20 09:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! Your kind words mean a lot. :)

Date: 2009-09-20 10:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] afra_schatz
That was really cool - a little creepy and a bit painful and a lot SPN. Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2009-09-20 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Currently, SPN is a bit painful ;)

Date: 2009-09-20 01:11 pm (UTC)
ext_302385: My default here and on LJ (Default)
From: [identity profile] macbyrne.livejournal.com
This was AWESOME!!! The tone, the glimpses of what's going on, the outsider POV. Every bit of it was amazing and I loved it!

Date: 2009-09-20 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed, and thanks for letting me know!

Date: 2009-09-20 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astrangerfate.livejournal.com
*sigh* That was so damn good and it totally destroyed me. If he dies. 200 years. Oh, Sammy. *cuddles*

I object very strongly to Dean's angel though. *gnashes teeth*

Gaaaaaah. So damn good. You're brilliant and it hurt. ♥

Date: 2009-09-20 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
You're brilliant and it hurt.

Thank you, beloved! I still hurt... maybe you can tell?

Hold me! ;)

Date: 2009-09-20 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astrangerfate.livejournal.com
*smishes* I can tell. I'm so sorry you're hurting.

If Dean keeps being an ass, I can so see this happening, and it makes me want to scream and bit pillows.

It's so fitting for how they are right now and that makes me so angry, because I want sunshine and rainbows, dammit! But I can just see Sam, cruising the streets at night, holding on to the things that remind him of his brother, trying not to feel. Oh, it kills me.

Mind if I rec it over in my journal briefly? :D

Date: 2009-09-20 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
It's so fitting for how they are right now and that makes me so angry, because I want sunshine and rainbows, dammit!

Me too! Where are my rainbows and puppies, dammit?!

Mind if I rec it over in my journal briefly?

Of course! I'd be honoured!

Date: 2009-09-20 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ficwriterjet.livejournal.com
So sad. Very well done story. I especially liked seeing it through a stranger's eyes. Poor Sammy! :( Thanks so much for writing and sharing. :)

Date: 2009-09-20 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you. Poor Sammy *hearts him*.

Date: 2009-09-20 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stardael.livejournal.com
Ouch. Oh poor Sammy. Being immortal isn't all it's cracked to be, is it? :( *hugs him*

Great job, Jas!

So does this mean you're not abandoning SPN after all?

Date: 2009-09-20 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thanks, m'dear.

Oh, poor Sammy :(

I seem to still have some in me. Damn SPN and its wiley ways.

Date: 2009-09-21 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stardael.livejournal.com
Well, I'm glad we haven't lost you completely! :) *hugs*

Btw, your implied Dean/Castiel hurts my brain!! *gets brain bleach*

Date: 2009-09-21 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Btw, your implied Dean/Castiel hurts my brain!! *gets brain bleach*

I think I'm gonna need a gallon of brain bleach after next week!

Date: 2009-09-21 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stardael.livejournal.com
Ugh. Spare some of that for me, would ya? *shudders*

Date: 2009-09-20 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tehomet.livejournal.com
Creeeeeepy but so cool. Thank you for posting.

Date: 2009-09-20 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad you liked - I think SPN is really a bit creepy, so I'm glad you felt it was in keeping.

Date: 2009-09-20 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] havenward.livejournal.com
:loves:

I have missed your writing, darlin'. Gorgeous snapshot. Love the outsider pov too. :)

Date: 2009-09-20 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thanks, my love!

*hearts*

Date: 2009-09-20 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irishka1205.livejournal.com
Ouch. I think that just broke me. oh, Sammy.

Date: 2009-09-20 11:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Sorry! ;)

Poor Sam :(

Date: 2009-09-21 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] absrip.livejournal.com
This just breaks my heart and pretty much describes how I feel about SPN at the moment*sigh* So sad and depressing. *hugs Sam* Great writing!

Date: 2009-09-21 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! I glad you thought it was apt. Poor Sam. :(

Date: 2009-09-21 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] littlestclouds.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. The last two paragraphs are killer. So to speak. Awesome, and yet kind of painful in a good way.

Date: 2009-09-21 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you thought so, and thanks for commenting.

Date: 2009-09-21 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alleysweeper.livejournal.com
*cries*


ETA: came by [livejournal.com profile] astrangerfate's rec.
Edited Date: 2009-09-21 02:07 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-09-21 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
*sniffles*

Poor Sammy.

Also, Hi! Glad you came over ;)

Date: 2009-09-21 08:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] godofstrife.livejournal.com
That was amazing. I especially loved the subtle reveal that Sam is immortal and that it's hundreds of years in the future. This would be an excellent ending for the show - depressing and painful - but still something unexpected.

I also can't get the image of Dean and Cas fucking on a cloud out of my head. *ishfjrsgivjlkjvka*

Thank you for sharing.

Date: 2009-09-21 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you thought it worked well for the show, and thanks for commenting :)

Date: 2009-09-21 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alphabet26.livejournal.com
Very nice, I really liked it!

Date: 2009-09-21 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jasmasson.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

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