Poor Hector never stood a chance against Paris, even from the crib. I like how you've given depth to Paris' selfishness, but still have him to show his vulnerability and insecurity only to Hector. The incident with Mestor nicely foreshadows Hector's decision to let Paris bring Helen to Troy. I'm eager to read the second part to this story.
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Date: 2005-01-23 07:16 pm (UTC)